This is a discussion thread about: Alternate Scene: utraya mokri -- the Tree of Voices. inside the Plot & Scripts forum, part of the AVATAR Movie Forums category. What if NEYTIRI: You are Omaticaya now. You may make your own bow from the wood of Hometree. (She looks ...
Alternate Scene: utraya mokri -- the Tree of Voices.
What if
NEYTIRI: You are Omaticaya now. You may make your own bow from the wood of Hometree.
(She looks away) And you may choose a woman.
The Omaticaya warrior is trying so hard to sound casual. Jake suppresses a question.
NEYTIRI: We have many fine women. Ninat is the best singer --
JAKE: Yes, she sings great. And I think that she likes me too. How do I choose her?
There is a swift blow to the side of his head that sends him flying.
NEYTIRI: skxawng! (She turns and runs out of the grove)
I honestly dont see why JC didn't do this!!!! its genius lol
haha it would be great. because neytiri would be still singel, better for us
but it would ruin the love story in it. and I think this is still the best choise. jake - neytiri. it totally fits
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OK Sanjwale, for the love storys sake:
Part 2
JAKE: (rubbing the side of his head) What the ? Hey, Neytiri wait!
Quickly on his feet, he chases the swift Omaticaya warrior out of the grove.
JAKE: Neytiri, hold up, I was only kidding.
Neytiri slows to a stop and looks back. Her eyes are fire, ears are laid back and her tail flicks in agitation. The look stops Jake in his tracks.
NEYTIRI: JakeSully! I dont understand this kidding!
JAKE: (walking gingerly forward with his hands up) I was only playing with you. Honest. I do not want Ninat or any other women in the Clan. I have already chosen
Neytiri straightens. The fire disappears as she eyes Jake warily.
NEYTIRI: You are not kidding?
Jake (placing his hands lightly on her shoulders) There has been only one that I care for. But this women must also choose me.
NEYTIRI: (melting into Jakes arms) She already has.
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The two lovers separate to catch their breaths.
JAKE: Wow, I wonder if Ninat kisses that good? (He smiles evilly)
WHACK!
I think it fits Jake stayed as he was in the film. This alternate looks more like something you'd see in a fanfic. For example one scene in Between Worlds had Jake eyeing two female hunters who were a mated pair. Neytiri slapped Jake for staring. He still has that human attitude no matter what body he is in, and she busted him for it.
Haha, I still remember that part xD
"When you hear nothing, you will hear everything. When you see nothing, you will see everything"
-"Sometimes I have no idea what she's talking about"
Yeah, he was told by her that Na'vi had no problem with same sex pairing. He didn't care for seeing dudes like that, but when he saw those two women, he did a 180 on that opinion.
Jake: You think I'm a pervert don't you?
Neytiri: No, you are just-male.
He still doesn't get it. Na'vi know better than to openly admire another once they are a mated pair. He should know this or risk Neytiri decking him in the face. Which she has done. She did that just over a dirty magazine prank he pulled on her. She did not find it funny.
Very funny stuff. makes me curious tho, has anyone written any add on material to actual scenes? For example, Jake can't hop up and get back into the link after Neytiri saved him so its pretty obvious to me that she had to put him on it.
If he would have said: "I haven't chosen yet. I'm not ready. Actually, this has no future - you know I'm a dreamwalker and I can't stay here forever."
this would have been reasonable, but of course the movie wouldn't have worked without the love story.
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