[Closed] CFFP 2 *Feedback Thread*

[Avery]

Please post all your feedback for the authors of the second CFFP here!

They would appreciate it greatly, and I would like to know what you all think of the CFFP as well.

Avery

[comedianmasta]

first, can't wait! Will edit later.


First Story- I felt it was hard to get into at first, but I must admit I found myself enjoying it by the time I was done. Great read, guys!!

Secound Story- Even though this one is mine, I enjoyed reading it a second time. Though, I do believe I put more description in it then is shown.... and I can't believe there's still mistakes, haha!!!

[Stanley_9875]

Very cool I cannot wait to read this and get feedback on our stories!

[Avery]

Secound Story- Even though this one is mine, I enjoyed reading it a second time. Though, I do believe I put more description in it then is shown.... and I can't believe there's still mistakes, haha!!!

Your story is unedited, so its the exact same as what you sent me through email.

[comedianmasta]

Your story is unedited, so its the exact same as what you sent me through email.

Yes, I figured. Thanks, Avery. I figured it must have been me. It was written in a day. Both of them. LOL. Thanks, anyway.

[Radioiron]

Good stories.
I'd like to hear what people thought about mine, Project Tirey.
How often are you thinking about putting these out? I almost have two more chapters finished and I feel like this is going to end up being a full on book when I'm finished with the plot line. I also found two errors in mine and it kind of has my ocd twitching, must...correct...every...copy....

[steven_m64]

hah damn i missed the release day of the cffp again, a great set of stories.

Good stories.
I'd like to hear what people thought about mine, Project Tirey.
How often are you thinking about putting these out? I almost have two more chapters finished and I feel like this is going to end up being a full on book when I'm finished with the plot line. I also found two errors in mine and it kind of has my ocd twitching, must...correct...every...copy....

i very much liked your entry and would love to see more of it, and the more of fit the better.

[Sacred Tsahaylu]

Good stories.
I'd like to hear what people thought about mine, Project Tirey.
How often are you thinking about putting these out? I almost have two more chapters finished and I feel like this is going to end up being a full on book when I'm finished with the plot line. I also found two errors in mine and it kind of has my ocd twitching, must...correct...every...copy....

I know how you feel about mistakes I too suffer from the irritating need to make sure everything is perfect.
Yet to read the stories, I'm gonna search for them right now

[comedianmasta]

I really, really, REALLY liked the other submissions this year. I really did. I had to go back and reread one from the old CFFP for one but otherwise I liked them Nice job, guys.