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A poem for Neytiri...

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prowler
, 02-22-2011 at 09:18 AM (1030 Views)
I decided to try and write a poem for princess Neytiri te Tskaha Mo'at’ite of the omaticaya... i never wrote one so...

You’re beautiful
Your eyes are big and yellow
Easy to get lost in them
I have done it countless times
Your hair unbraided or braided
Has to be the best hair in the world
I just want to be close to you
Forever and ever
As long as I will live
Take my hand
Let’s walk and never stop
And never look back
Your my love
I love you

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  1. Hawnu ìla Eywa's Avatar
    I love your literary output! I told you that you have a talent... Don't waste it!
  2. Alan's Avatar
    Hey, I can tell you've captured the feelings of your heart there, ma tsmukan. Oel ngati kameie...
  3. Ja'k Dawsiin's Avatar
    i feel your passion,longing,and artistic intent in your first poem,Prowler...keep at it,sir,would love to see some moar. try some rhyming on 1 and 3 lines,2 and 4 lines,on your next poem,i think it is called iambic pentameter. try writing one in a 4 line format,or verse.

    MOAR,please....

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