Avatar ii - the beginning

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[PART 15]

At the rocky end of the cave, a lightblue shining and totally flat wall can be seen. It’s definitely not made by natural forces. Pearson shakes is head: “Thought this day can’t become more crazy..”
Everyone is moving towards the shiny structure as there is it seems clear that there is no way up anymore. Neytiri is the first one reaching the wall and starting to study it while avoid touching it. She knees down, trying to sense or smell something.
“Lets try to get a way in since the air isnt getting better here!” barks Pearson as he ramms his ellbow against the wall. He instantly collapses, losing conciousness.
“Colonel..!” Rodriguez jumps to Pearson, shaking his head as he’s trying to get him awake.
Neytiri turns her head, approaching Pearson as his eyes suddenly opens: “You human always act quick.. quick.. not think!” She looks down to the Colonel annoyed but reaching out her hand to get him back on his feet. Jake closes in and pat Neytiri’s arm. She looks at Jake with sparkling eyes: “.. but somethimes I like.”
“Lets avoid being a skxawng today.” cautions Norm “We‘ve lost already much of our equipment and look at us.”
Pearson looks up to Norm: “At least you get carried around safely on Trak’ahs back...”
“One Moment, please. Do you think I wouldn’t want to walk on my own?!”
Pearson stands up, joggling the dust off his ripped clothes: “Listen my boy. You still got your nice exomask with you, having a comfy seat while our clock is TICKING.”
Jake intervenes “Stop guys. Lets find a way to get in and stop arguing!”
Pearson and Norm are looking away from each other demonstratively while Rodriguez picks up a small stone, tossing it at the wall. The stone gets deflected soundless, despite the structure appears as solid as diamond.
“I’m gonna ramm a rock into that damn wall if it doesnt let us go in now...” murmurs Pearson impantiently.
Trak’ah and Neytiri sneaking along the wall like cats, their hands exposed to the wall but not touching it. “Txing tsa..!” Trak’ah looses patience an steps back, leaving Neytiri alone at the wall. She opens her eyes and walks straight to Jake: “Only you have allowancy to open gate.”
Jake shakes his head in disbelief: “Me? I don’t even get you!”
Neytiri put her left hand on Jake’s arm and points her right index finger at Jake’s forehead: “Inside..! Only you can, Jake.”
“Better still today...” barks Pearson impatiently, while caughing.
“Fnu!” shouts Trak’ah while raising his hand energetically.
Jake closes his eyes as everyone is staring at him expectantly.
His eyes opens: “I cant, there’s nothing!”
Neytiri takes his arm: “Mawey...” her voice is calm and low.
Jake closes his eyes again, apparently trying to concentrate. He reaches for Neytiri’s arm and starts to step towards the wall. Total silence as the rest of the group is staring at Jake, who walks slowly alongside the wall, his eyes closed. Then he stops, he moves his hand .. and touches the wall. A part of the wall disappears, leaving a round object in the center in front of another layer of the blueish structure. The round object has two moulded contours, two hands. One long hand with four digits and one smaller hand with five digits.

“Ohhhh myyy...” says Norman with a deeply stirred voice. “A hand of a Na’vi and a human. I can’t believe that... its freak’in me!”
Rodriguez’s jaw drops: “It’s supposed to be opened by human and na’vi together... it’s like someone asks us to cooporate, ...”
“...like we actually have a common destiny.” adds Norm, still with an emotional voice.

Jake tries to squeeze his hand into the form, his five digit hand is too big. “Pearson or Rodriguez...I need one of your hand here!”

Neytiri looks at Jake, he nods and so she puts her hand into the form. Nothing happens.
Pearson arrives and straightly put his hand into the form. Everyone is staring at the form with their fullest attention as blue shiny light emerges off the form.
Everyone is staring at the form with their fullest attention as blue shiny light emerges off the form. Neytiri jumps back instictively.
The center of the wall just disappears, creating a large arc towards the room behind.
It unveils something what none of the group ever could expect on Pandora or somewhere else.
They step into a giant hall. Right behind them the wall closes instantly after the last one passed through. The walls are shiny and slightly reflective within a diffuse blueish light.
The center of the round-shaped hall contains a large floating discus-shaped object, approximately 70 meters long and 30 meters wide. It floats above something like a bassin filled with a black fluid. At every 90° of the massive hall, a white fibrelike globes sits attached. It looks like the same material as the white branch was made of.
Neytiri and Trak’ah are sinking on her knees, their hands covering their foreheads.
“Eywaaa... fit tseng..!” Norm slides off Trak’ahs back and lands on his butt.
Then a shiny bright light appears in front of them for a very short moment, leaving behind a tall humanoid creature.


[END OF PART 15, PART 16 TO BE FOUND BELOW]

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[PART 16]

It is taller than a human but a bit shorter than a na’vi, has cyan-blue skin, small ears, no tail, yellow big eyes like a na’vi, has four digits on its hand and also dark hair on its head, although the hair appears thinner than na’vi hair, a thin long queue attached with long moving tendrils. It has a female face and wears a light reflective suit, no wrinkles.

“Oel ayngati kameie, ma evengä…”

Nytiri and Trak’ah are startled up, shocked.

“Omum oel futa tìfyawìntxuri oeyä perey aynga nìwotx...”

Pearson looks to Jake: “I don’t understand that...can someone translate..?”
Jake pats Neytiri on her cheek... “Could you.. ?”
Neytiri shrugs but then nods.
The humanoid continues, Neytiri translates (navi) “And will lead you what you are seeking for. You see me as we appeared 107000 world of Eywa’s children years ago. This message has been left for you, our children, to be read once you have grown mature enough to seek for the answers. We had been living on this world long time before you were born...” A threedimensional interactive model of the Alpha Centauri starsystem shows up “...then exhausted our worlds resources, times of great sorrow fell down to our world and we started to live on two worlds..” A second of moon of the planet Polyphemus gets highligted “..until we depleted all ressources, left a waste embedded into the body of our homeworld. We changed and wanted to undo the sorrow we left on the worlds, we cleared the worlds of our dwellings and were ready to give life back to the natural destiny. Before we finally left, we gave birth to you ...” The creature points at the map, which now leaves the Alpha Centauri System into the vast void before reaching another starsystem with nine planets, highlighting the third planet of it, a world mostly covered by oceans and with two polar ice caps. “...and you. Both of you made the way to adapt the environment of each home.” Pearson collaps to the shiny floor, caughs, shaking his head, deeply shocked: “Oh my ****ing god.. oh noo...oh..”
The humanoid continues: “So, as you have been growing mature and stand together from the two different worlds, as you reached the maturity to influence the world of Eywa’s children by reaching down to the embedded waste of our times, we left this for you. What you see behind is what is left of our heritage. It will let you overleap the mistakes we had done. As you are each other’s compliment, it is your destiny to share our hertiage, to grow together from now on, as only together, you can exist in forthcoming times. As your parents, we are are obligated to not let you expirience the same sorrow. We have left the three worlds a long time ago but our spirit has been always with you, we see you and will see you at Eywa.”

The humanoid disappears.

Neytiri closes her eyes in a manner of some kind of prayer, while Pearson crawls on the ground. Rodriguez still stares towards the place from which the Na’vi-like creature had just spoken. Same does Norm and Jake.
Pearson throws up.
Rodriguez grasps for air: “That can’t be real. God... We supposed to come from homo erectus, this.. crap will overthrow our whole ****in’ everything!”
Norm looks to the ground: “This might be the answer for the missing gap about 100.000 years ago.”
Pearson turns around, his eyes filled with fear and discontent: “Just shut up..! I can’t stand that, wanna get outa here..!”
Jake slowly stands up: “This is the turning point of all of us. I mean, this is the beginning.”

Norm is gazing at the large floating object: “Yes, I think from now on nothing will be anymore like it was before. Seems the crown of evolution, us humans, have just been reduced to the children of the children...”
Pearson looks at Norm: “What!?”
Rodriguez intervenes: “He means, we are actually the children of the Na’vi. Seeded out to a distant workd from here, where they had been long time before...”
Pearson bursts out in loud laughter. “So, hahaha.. we are now na’vioids?” Then he vomits again.
“Honestly, this message left more questions than it answered. How could that ancient holomessage speak nowadays na’vi?” asks Norm.
Jake points at the craft “Maybe the answer is inside there oe somewhere else in this room or outside or even on earth.”
Trak’ah looks at the humans: “You talk too much. But this is big change.”
Neytiri opens her eyes, which are filled by tears and emotions: “So this is Eywa? This?”
Jake gently put his arm around her shoulder: “Yes.. I mean no.. I dont’t know. Probably they have created Eywa, to not let this beautiful world ever be devastated again.”
Neytiri backs off Jake, her face shifts into rage: “tsleng!!” She steps back, her hands shielded against Jake and the others. “No... NOOOO....!” Neytiri sinks to her knees and cries out all her emotional pain.
Norm takes a deep breath as he watches Neytiri on the ground, left Jake and Trak’ah helpless next by: “I’m afraid we found this message and the whole thing too early, it’ll be a deep shock for both of us and I think even more for the Na’vi with all their roots and spirit towards Eywa.”
Jake tries to rescue the situation: “Things can’t be undone. Eywa is real. Its just about her origin, it may had something to do with the ancient na’vi on Pandora. But EYWA IS REAL!”
Pearson seems regaining his temper: “Even Eywa is real or looks real. But how to send this message to our worlds? Humans left Pandora at war with the Na’vi. And I still need to digest that message regarding the ‘children thing’ by my own first..”
Jake looks determined: “Then we’d better get it done soon, before more sorrow will be spread. It is our destiny as it said. Na’vi and humans share the sam destiny, we can only survive if we stand together.”
Norm nods: “Couldn’t say it better.”
Jake looks at Pearson: “Are you in Colonel?”
Pearson looks up, hesitating a moment: “Well, there’s obviously no other choice, so.. alright! Let’s get movin’!”
Rodriguez nods and stands up.
“Trak’ah, are you with us on this important mission? I really need you brother.”
Trak’ah nods: “I will fly with you.”
Then Jake goes to Neytiri, kneeing down hext to her, while softly kissing her head.
“Neytiri... Eywa is real. It’s our destiny, I know it and I feel it deep inside my heart. Without you, I can’t do this.”
Neytiri looks up to Jake, wiping her tears off her face. She nods. “I never let ma Jake alone, remember?”
They cuddle each other shortly, before getting up and step towards the floating craft.


[END OF PART 16, PART 17 TO BE FOUND ATTACHED BELOW]

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[PART 17]

As they almost reach the craft, a round object with a moulded form of two hands like the one at the wall visualize by its own. Again, a four digit long hand and a five digig shorter one are needed to ...
This time Rodriguez and Trak’ah put in their hands. The same blueish light emerges and a part of the object’s outer wall seems like dematerializing. A round gate into the object opens up, Jake and Pearson walk in first. Neytiri slowly raises her feet to step on the edge of the floating object, hesitating – and finally step in, studying the surrounding walls of what appears like a corridor. At the end of the roughly 8 meter long corridor, an octagonal gate can be seen, next by something like a terminal. It starts to move, opens up and releases a tiny white floating ball, which emits a blueish beam of light. Trak’ah raises his bow but Jake gently put his hand on his arm to drop it. “Looks like it’s scanning us.” remarks Norm. Before he could even look back to the gate, it already opens soundless. “Now I realize what this is.” Says Pearson while entering the room behind the gate. Six seats materialize automatically, three bigger ones and three smaller ones – each of them with a customized panel attached. They all face a round-shaped wall, viewing the hall where the object is in. “Wow, its a goddamn spaceship!” realizes Rodriguez as he inspects the room. Neytiri shrugs: “Will this take us up?” she asks with signs of fear on her face. Jake takes his arm around her and nods: “Yes. This will lead us to our destiny...” his lips are small, nervousity can be seen on his face. Trak’ah has already dropped Norm on one of the smaller seats and walks around the room, his bow still in readiness. “This stuff looks way more advanced than everything what I have seen before.” notes Rodriguez, who’s inspecting the walls. “I’d say its a mix of organic structure and nanotubes...” says Norm, his original fears shifted into excitement. “As we just got our first space elevator up using nanotubes, they could engineer a whole spacecraft made of it...WOW!
“I knew thats gonna be a crazy day!” barks Pearson.
“How to fly?” asks Jake, trying to find any steering instruments.
“Lets think..” suggests Norm, while he tries to get something activated on his panel.
Nothing happens. Trak’ah starts to walk around like a nervous tiger alongside the walls.
The tiny ball which appeared to scan them earlier floats in soundless and position itself in the center of the bridge.

“Oel ayngati kameie, ma evengä…” a soft male voice can be heard.
“Oh noo...” Pearson’s eyes are rolling “translaaation please..!”
Neytiri looks up towards the ‘speaking’ ball with a stunning face as it continues to speak in na’vi.
“To leave from ground or manouver this vehicle, two of each children to sit in the center place, your thoughts will guide it...” Neytiri drops her face impatiently as the floating ball continues to speak in na’vi. “I don’t know some words!”
Jake takes Neytiri’s hand: “Try it, my baby, just tell us what do you understand...”
She continues to translate: “concentrate the thoughts to the items and ... keep balancing out ... the different mode of speed, easy to adapt...” Neytiri shouts out in anger while Trak’ah tries to listen. “This words, I don’t know!”
Suddenly the ball stops talking but remains in the position.
Norm points towards the two seats in the middle, one of them a smaller one, one bigger: “I guess I know how it SHOULD work. The thoughts of two of us will steer this vessel. It must be one Na’vi and one human, though. Seems all important control functions can be only activated by two of us...”
Jake takes seat on the bigger chair: “Norm, you’d better take that seat next to me, we should try it together. To the rest.. please take seats as we try to get it outa here!”
“And fasten your seatbelts!” adds Pearson. Trak’ah looks around but can’t find anything, which Pearson might mean.
“Now lift off!” shouts Jake.
Nothing happens.
“And I hoped it works like steering an ikran!”
Neytiri, who sits next to Jake looks out of the main screen, pointing there: “Tsawke!”
Trak’ah’s eyes are widening as he notices the sunlight outside.
“Looks like the hanger doors have opened!” remarks Rodriguez.
The ship hasn’t been moving yet.
Neytiri’s face turns over to Jake: “Where we fly?”
Jakes knows the answer: “Moon Ekleus, a world close to Pandora. There goes our way.”
Norm can be seen next to him, staring upwards.
“You mean leaving kelku? Leaving children of Eywa’s home?!?”
In the second she turns her head back towards the main screen, the hall suddenly disappears below. Within seconds the vast green forests can be seen in the evening sun as the craft zooms upwards before passing the clouds. Short moments later the lightblue Pandoran sky shifts into darkblue, indigoblue and finally black.

[END OF PART 17, PART 18 TO BE ATTACHED BELOW]

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[PART 18]

***5:52PM near human camp site***

Max, Mo’at, the female med-tech and a young na’vi female can be seen picking leaves and fruits next to a chrystal clear spring. A fire-horse is sucking nectar off flowers and some buzzing, colorful insects can be seen above the water. One of the trooper loyal to Pearson swings in: “Max, there you are! Was looking for you all the time!”
“Oh hi.. Jonas.. right?”
- “Yep, me.”
“Sorry, I need a while to memorize new names.”
- “Never mind. Hey, the reason, why I’m here. Our only shower cubicle has a malfunction. The water circulator looses pressure.”
Max is blinking his eyes. “And you think that I can fix it? Am a scientist, worked for the avatar program before. Can’t even fix a LED bulb. Rodriguez could fix that but...”
- “Then it’s gonna be stinky in the camp soon.” Jonas, a blond short haired medium sized guy in his early 30’s turns around protestingly.
- “I won’t ever visit you guys compartment then!” giggles the med tech girl.
The young na’vi female, aged roundabout 17 or 18 in comparison to humans stands up, her face expressing a sign of pity. Max and the female med-tech are watching the na’vi girl walking after Jonas, closing up quickly since her steps are twice as large as his. She touches lightly Jonas shoulder with her fingertips, make him cringe. The young na’vi girl backs off slightly as Jonas turns around with widened eyes. “Sorry..” she stammers: “you... washing you, clothing? I show you place .. you like?”
Jonas raises his eyebrows, looking up to her: “Kaltxi.. you are so nice. I’m happy you help me out! What is your name? I am Jonas.”
She smiles embarassed: “Me.. my name Najat..”
As they just are about to walk away, Jonas suddenly turns around: “Look guys, it has to be someone from 4.4 lightyears away to offer me some kind of HELP.” Then they walk away, appearing like mother and child from the back.
Moat: (na’vi) “Don’t forget to be back soon, we prepare for dinner!”
The med-tech girl and Max are looking into each others eyes and giggle: “Wohooo.. don’t forget the candle-light!”
Suddenly a supersonic BOOM thunders above the forest. Mo’at and nearby Max and the med-tech girl are looking up into the sky. An incredibly fast object soars into the evening sky, leaving a faint tail lightened by the sun.
Mo’at makes an outcry, her hand covers her mouth as she looks into the sky: “Neytiri som set neto...” Her eyes are filled with tears as she feels her daughter has left the world which no Omaticaya ever left before.


*** END OF FIRST PLOT (AVATAR II)***

[The People]

The level of commitment you have for this is so awesome. It's kinda serving as my fix til the blu ray comes out.

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Thx So shall I get started with Avatar III?
Coz I guess the plot so far would already generate 2-3 hours movie time.

[Akutan]

that's it? It's over? I want more
It was awesome, though

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Umm.. well, I got a rough idea of the plot for Avatar III and I would attach it on this one in here so it can be read in one piece. What would you like to happen next? Choose something you'd love to see, probably it'll be possible to let it happen, depends also on the characters, as they actually lead the storyline!

[Akutan]

the last bit with Jonas and Najat was interesting. But I would love to see what happens with Jake, Neytiri and the other onboard that ship. And what about RDA and Selfridge?

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the last bit with Jonas and Najat was interesting. But I would love to see what happens with Jake, Neytiri and the other onboard that ship. And what about RDA and Selfridge?

then let the voyage continue..! For the next time, we're going to see two different plots simultanously, one at the Omaticaya hometree / human camp and one .. somewhere outside Pandora, where Neytiri and Jake are currently. Both storylines show the ongoing development between the humans and na'vi, while Jake and Neytiri are in the center of 'the beginning'... Later, both plots will unite. Enjoy!