Avatar ii - the beginning

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[Note: the storyline will be added time by time, this note will be removed when the story has been completed All characters occurring in here and seen in the movie have been watched and analyzed carefully several times in order to match their personality and behavior es precisely as possible. I am not an English native speaker, therefore please forgive any kind of linguistic or spelling mistakes. I just hope as many as possible can read and understand this story.] - Avatar II The Beginning can be downloaded as PDF (attachment), Avatar III Beyond Frontiers is currently in progress.

[PART ONE]

Loads of RDA personnel and SecOps are boarding their vessel and can be seen lifting off towards the cloudy sky. The sun is setting and the RDA base remains in silence, almost all lights turned off. The three scientists left on Pandora are carrying equipment out of the main RDA complex into one of the last few remaining Samsons down on Pandora. Below the Utral Aymokriä (tree of souls) the Omaticaya tribe is sitting and singing, in the center Jake, Neyriti and Mo'at are standing upright, as Jake is sworn in as the new leader of the tribe.

**01.09.2154 - 07:03 AM local time - Pandora**

the sun is shining through the jungle trees, somewhere nearby the Utral Aymokriä. All Na'vis can be seen sleeping on the ground, the first are waking up. They have lost everything, their home, their tools but they are now in freedom. Neyriti can be seen next to a small spring, washing her war-painting off her face. Jake is next to her and kisses softly her forehead. Neytiri's eyes are opening and she smiles warmly, put her long slender arms around Jake and pull him softly towards her... Jake and Neytiri are going back to the tribe, some are still mourning for the many who died just a day ago. Jake knows, as the Toruk Makto is no more in need to save Pandora, so is the need to get the Omaticaya back on their feet, a home, a new beginning. Meanwhile we see the helicopter next to the damaged remote outpost with the avatar link units, work is underway to get it fixed so that a breathable atmosphere can be reestablished inside. To find a new home tree proves a bit tricky since the Na'vi require the right flow of energy and the appearance of Eywa around and inside it. Mo'at dismisses several potential home locations and explains Jake why it is so important for the Omaticaya to chose the right place to live. A night passed.. and another one... Some older Na'vi and young children apparently feel unwell, their throat hurts and they get red spots on their chest. Many are getting nervous and believe it was the presence of the sky people who poisened Eywa's children (the planet and its organisms and spirit). Jake wishes so much for Grace to return, but he knows she will be with Eywa forever.

**days later**

The Omaticaya finally got Mo'ats approval for a suitable home. A tree, half day march away from the tree of the souls, slightly smaller than the original home tree. The flow of positive Energy and the presence of Eywa is strong here, though. This is the right place. Work has begun to establish all the treebeds and the central meeting place. It is the first time all Na'vi can be seen working at the same time. Some adults start to feel weak, too and the young children and older ones start to get fever, their body is sometimes trembeling. Jake start to feel guilty for all what humanity has brought to this planet. The many who died in the battle a week ago are not enough, now the slow death seems to encroach. Even Mo'at and the tree of souls, nor the remaining human scientists, who are living in the repaired outpost cant cure them. She cries in front of the tree of souls.

***a day later inside the outpost***

Norm, Jeff and Max (the only three humans left on Pandora by now) are sitting in front of a screen, reviewing data retrieved from probes measuring the athmospheric composition, sun radiation and water quality. Another blood sample of an ill tribe member comes under the bio-scanner. They have been working for days and nights to find answers or at least some hints. The facilities on the RDA base are lacking power since the bulldozer crossed its perimeter on the day of the battle and devastated its energy grid.

'Jeff,' Norm said while leaning over the newest results from the blood sample 'I guess I got the answer. Its the ash from the home-tree bombing, it rained down for days and is damaging the loungues of our Na'vi friends out there.'
Jeff stares at Norm, while Max is rushing in: 'How many of the tribe are affected?' Norm is wiping his eyes: 'I fear its all of them, since they all were in the fall-out zone, that material is poisonous to them and its a matter of time when it breaks out on everyone.'

'Oh my holy..!' Max bursts out 'how can we get this done with our extremely limited capacities here?!' Jeff shakes his head 'I guess we are responsible for the extinction of a whole tribe...'

***In the mid of the night***

The new hometree is in silence, the Omaticaya tribe is taking rest, the faint light of the bioilumicent vegetation shines through the hometree. Jake and Neytiri lie in the same tree-bed, tightly cuddled. She wears some more colorful decoration than before. Her eyes are closed and her mouth looks like having a relaxed smile. Jake's ears start to move slightly. Suddenly a roaring sound, somewhere high above the area.

Someone from downstairs screams up, the sky people are returning(!) Jake's eyes are opening widely as Neyriti is searching the sky for that craft. Its not visible anymore, though but she can still hear the fading sounds, she knows the direction where the sounds are from, that thing must have landed on the closed RDA base. She looks at Jake with tears in her eyes, asking him why they come back. (...) Immediately Jake and Trak 'ah (a senior warrior) swinging themselves on their mountain banshees (Jakes original one is still loyal to him) and heading towards the skies. Neytiri is calling her own ikran and follows them into the night sky. Jake, Neytiri and Trak'ah are sitting on a tall tree, close to the RDA base with view into it. The big shuttle craft can be seen on the apron, the rear hatch opened and humans rushing out right into the complex. Neytiri is getting furious with tears in her eyes and wants to immediately calls everyone for combat but Jake calms her temper down. However, not even he could ever expect they come back.. after just a WEEK. He talks quietly to Neytiri and Trak'ah and their decision has been made. Tomorrow at dawn they will get everyone available of the clan to get to the base and get the humans to leave FOR EVER.

***next morning, dawn***

The Omaticaya are still resting in their tree beds as it starts to get light. Jake and Neytiri are already awake, jumping elegantly out of their joint tree bed. Trak'ah is waking up among others, starting to sing a war song. Others of the clan are waking up, those next to the meanwhile high number of ill looking na'vis had another bad night, too less sleep, too many times waking up to feed their ill loved ones,.. Suddenly some are pointing into the sky and shout something in na'vi. A tiny, obviously unmanned craft is approaching the tribe. Chaos emerges, the warriors are aming at the tiny round craft and attacking it, others are walking away from the tree. Jake jumps on his ikran as the craft starts to send a message in na'vi. 'We see you, we are back on Pandora in emegrency, our energy to drive our ship is not sufficient to get us home, we need your help to leave Pandora and let you live in peace.' Jake cant believe what he's hearing at the moment, Neyriti stands slightly behind Jake and her eyes express suspicion and discomfort. All in a sudden, another craft roars up and as the helicopter swings in to touch down, literally everyone of the tribe is aiming their arrows at the landing craft... Jake turns to his Omaticaya fellowers and rises his arms for a calm down, telling them to let them (humans)explain why they are here again. After what happened, it can be easily seen that many Omaticaya warriors still refuse to drop their arrows. The left hatch of the craft opens. A guy which has Jake has seen on the command deck quite a while ago comes out with his exopack, unarmed. He stands, turns back and waiving out someone else.
Selfridge steps out, although very slowly. More arrows are going up and pointing at him. Jakes eyes are widening, Neytiri's mouth becomes a faint line. Her face was never so cold before. Trak'ah steps closer to Jake, asking him if he shouldnt instantly kill Selfridge. Jake blocks him off.

'Let them say what they have to say, we will then see what we do with them'. Selfridge looks freightened as the much taller Na'vi surround him, his co-worker and the craft closer.

Selfridge begins: 'I am sorry..I am so sorry what happened to you what we have done to you,...' Neyriti's face is frozen '.. we are here without arms, totally. We fully understand you may disagree from the beginning but we need your help to get back to our home.'

>Some rumbling sounds from the crowd<

'What do you expect us to do to get you off Pandora?' Jake asks with a fierceful face.

'We calculated that we need just 150 kilogrammes of Unobtanium, we could...'

Neytiri roars up, jumps out of the crowd, grabs Selfridge with her right hand on his chest, violently pushes him against the cockpit window of the craft, his feet hanging above the ground.

'You.. you killed so many of ourr people... and you killed MY FATHER, I should kill you.. now!' Jake jumps into the scene as Neytiri is about to get her knife out while Selfridge starts to choke, his legs trembeling.

'Neytiri! Get him down, PLEASE!' Jake begs..

Neytiri looks at Jake, then back to Selfridge, scorning him in na'vi.. releasing him as he falls down to the ground. 'Rwuaah!' A hefty short sound comes out of Neytiri's mouth as she stands above Selfridge who is slowly moving to regain control of himself.

'My wife can't forgive you, so can't I' Jake says 'And we will let you get off our world.'

[End of Part ONE]

[Vision89]

n1 man!! :D keep dooing tht!!

[Hydra Makto]

Pretty good...

Don't know about that 'Sky People getting the Na'Vi sick' part though... I mean, people already like to claim that Avatar screams the white man vs native americans theme, if you toss in that the sky people got the Na'Vi sick with chicken pox or something then that's just icing on their cake.
Personally I didn't feel those themes were being "screamed" at me by Avatar but, no need to put more fuel on the fire. Humans have been on Pandora for plenty long already and the Na'Vi haven't gotten sick yet (to our knowledge).
Otherwise very good Didn't expect the humans to come back and ask for assistance with fuel hehe.

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Many thx for your feedback and am glad for any!
The story has just begun and many unexpected happenings will come up... so wait, enjoy and see..

[chawk1993]

:ncool::ncool:Awesome! I love that you have included that Eytuken is DEAD. Does Norm have a bigger role? What about Max? You have protential gift of writing dude.:ncool::ncool:

['upxare]

:ncool::ncool:Awesome! I love that you have included that Eytuken is DEAD. Does Norm have a bigger role? What about Max? You have protential gift of writing dude.:ncool::ncool:

I have incorporated Max into the storyline, however his role will be minor, however, Norm's role will be more important as we'll see later.

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[PART TWO]

At the end of the day, the Omaticaya and especially Jake and Neytiri felt they have the home-advantage in this situation and could set the rules for the temporary presence of the RDA on Pandora. All carryable weapons were collected from the humans and storaged behind iron doors on the RDA base while a bunch of Omaticaya warriors guarding it. However, the humans were not allowed to dig at the site of the burned original home-tree but got permission to do so somewhere near a rocky hill, quite far away and not easy to reach. At nightfall, RDA engineers can be seen repairing the energy grid to get the base at least partially back on power.

Jake and Neytiri lying together in their treebed. Around them are colorful bioilumiscent lights of life and choking sounds of other Omaticaya from lower sections of the tree. Neytiri can be seen crying quietly, behind her Jake with his arms around her.
'Neytiri, I am with you and the Omaticaya forever, I am ready to give my life for you..'
Neytiri wipes her tears out of her face:'I know, ma Jake. And I will be with you in tsahaylu with you forever...' Jake places a soft kiss on Neyriti's head '.. but when I see this tikawng faketuan, I feel so terrible, see our people, see our homeland, everything is crying, the child of eywa is crying...'
Jake put his head on Neytiri's, softly diving his nose into her hair: 'Eywa hu nga, and so am I'
A short warm smile appears on Neyriti's face as she closes her eyes.

***next morning***

Sunrise above the new hometree, the Omaticaya are having their morning food, mostly vegetables, processed parts of plants and insects. Mo'at is not among them, so arent two mothers with their babies. They mourn below the Utral Aymokriä, preparing to pass the souls and energy of the two very young one's to Eywa.

A sound of an incoming helicopter disrupts the natural and tribal sounds around the home tree. Again, in a very high level of caution, around 20 remaining Omaticaya rushing to their bows, Jake walks straight towards the landing craft. Its hatch opens and two men jumps off the craft wearing their expopacks. Unarmed with raised arms. Jake turns to his fellowers and giving them a handsign to lower their arrows.
‘What brings you here, today?’ Jake asks as Neytiri climbs down the tree slowly.
‘Let me please first introduce ourselfes, my name is Perry, next to me you see Emanuel..’
Emanuel tries to smile as Jake looks down to his eyes with some kind of suspicion.
‘We both come here today to undo at least a bit of the damage we brought to Pandora and the Na’vi here.
Meanwhile Mo’at has arrived back to the scene and stands next to Neytiri, a few meters behind Jake. Neytiri chokes, her face shows pain and discomfort.
‘Jake, we are damn serious, we know what is going on, your tribe is seriously ill because... because of our own ignorance...we want to help you, that is why we are here now, we want god to forgive us one day...’
‘How could we trust you after all? What is the real reason..’ Mo’at steps in: “Jake.. “ Mo’at reaches her hand down to Perry, covering his forehead and chest as she completely focus her eyes on him. Mo’at looks up into the cloudy sky, then back to Perry and Emanuel:”We take your help, we have no other choice. You brought us here with your insanity." Jake nods.
Perry reachs his hand out to Jake: “We’ll help you, trust me. We got the hardware, we need Norm, though. Where is he?” Jake and Perry shaking hands. “I will reach out for him, he’s near us.”
“If possible, we need to set up a medical camp in here to do our research as well as for immediate medical treatment”.
Roaring sound of disagreement goes through the crowd behind Jake.
“We’ll get you a suitable place, guys.” Says Jake as he swings on his direhorse.

As Neyriti attempts to get on her own direhorse, her mother pulls her back. “You are too weak my daughter.” she says in na’vi.

Jake reaches the outpost and informs Norm, Max and Jeff about the return of the RDA and all related happenings. While Jeff remains in the outpost for further research of collected water samples, Norm and Max grab their exopacks, PDAs and rush into the nearby parked helicopter.

A few hours later much noise emerges around the hometree, helicopters are roaring over it to drop equipment to the nearby dedicated medical camp site. A mobile exolab as been deployed, Norm, Max and Perry are moving equipment into the exolab and the attached medical tent. RDA troopers are seen helping them to get the stuff unloaded before the crafts are roaring off again.
Meanwhile Jake sits with Neyriti, she can hardly walk anymore as her condition is worsening constantly, as many others of the Omaticaya. Trak’ah and a handful other young warriors are the last who seem not to be effected yet. And Jake. He holds Neyriti in his arms, his tears rolling out of his eyes. Neyriti is choking and looking next at Mo’at, her mother, who knees down in an attempt to reach the energy of Eywa. Her pain can be seen in her face as she force discipline and close her eyes, trying to reach out for Eywa.
Wispering sounds come out of Mo’ats mouth.
“Neytiri,” Jake sobs “I never thought how real love feels like, on earth I just couldnt..”
Neyriti opens her eyes, looks up at Jake as she tries to smile.
“Here I found my destiny, you are all I hoped and wished for, wanna keep you forever”
Neytiri smiles slightly, manages to get one of her arms up as her index finger wipes Jake’s tear from his cheek. “You are always my toruk makto and we will be always together, if not here then with Eywa...” Jake screams up into the sky as he bursts out in emotion. Trak’ah can be seen collapsing just some meters away.


***shortly later, RDA base, main operation deck***

Selfridge, Colonel Pearson, two more army servants, obviously ranked as captains and Perry are standing around the main 3D mapping terminal. Behind them the windowfront towards the apron, where further ground activities can be seen. Heavy equipment is rolling out.
“Welcome back on Pandora, guys” Selfridge starts “things went a bit different as we expected, but after all we are back. Mining at the new site has been resumed, however with minimum equipment as Jake with his blue friends have successfully annihilated roundabout $2billion hardware and equipment.
Perrys eyes are widening: “Does that still count? With all respect, sir, but we are just here to get away, isnt it?”

[END OF PART 2, PART 3 TO BE FOUND ATTACHED BELOW]

[NYSEF816]

this is really great stuff, i am excited to see norm.

keep it up!!

['upxare]

thx and I'm doing my best, brother!

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[PART THREE]

“Mr. Perry Baxter..” Selfridge smiles sardonically “where are you actually dreaming about? We got a job to do, we gotta resume work and we gotta get compensated the losts we suffered here on this world.” Selfridge points out of the window front towards the busy apron “Do you really think we just came back here to pack our suitcases and head back to good old earth to explain our shareholders there ‘oh.. something went wrong there, we just screwed our $220 billion project out there’, do you seriously believe that?!”
Perry stares into Selfridges eyes as he continues: “we just have to hang out here with minimum equipment for some more months till the new supply vessel arrives from earth.”
Pearson shakes slowly his head while he leans on the 3D mapping tablet. “We haven given them (the tribe) our word that we get our *** outa here and if we don’t, they will kick us into orbit. We have hardly combat equipment left here on Pandora!”
Selfridge laughs: “We might have insufficient hardware here but in some days there will be none of the tribe left out there! Look where their guards are. Gone! And btw., not even anyone on earth knows anything what’s up in here since our subspace communication network is still 3 years away” Selfridge points with his index finger towards Perry: “And I cant remember that I have given any permission to move any equipment out of the base, did I? You gotta get it back here by tomorrow dawn. Kapische?”

Shortly later Perry and Pearson can be seen walking in the corridor outside the central command deck. “I just cant believe this..” Perry’s frustration is seen on his face.
“We have done already too much and I give a **** on the shareholders. I’ll handle this, trust me. You’d better get out to your friends asap.. they need you more than anyone in here at the moment.”



***night, at the medical treatment site near the Omitacaya hometree***

“It’s good that you re back, Perry!” says Dorm as he takes another blood sample, this time from Neytiri’s arm, as she lies among many others in a camp bed. “Take a look at the data I retrieved! It looks like a carbonoxid intoxination as a result of the fall-out after the initial battle.” Perry closes in.
“But we just cant find anything which nutralizes it out of the Na’vi blood. Jake seems to be immune but his blood isn compatible to the Na’vis. Its so goddamn frustrating, we re running out of time!”
Perry’s eyes are widening “How much time do we have left?!”
Dorm is rusing to a notepad to synchronize further research results: “I’d give them 3 to 4 more hours, then we’ll see them passing away like flies. We have lost 6 Omaticaya today.” Dorm is looking back to the little desk next to Neyriti, where Jake can be sitting next to her, wiping away her sweat due to her fever. Infusion tubes are connected to her arms. Her eyes are closed.
“Where’s my apple btw?” Norm asks “I need my last apple on Pandora to get through this night!” Max sweeps in with an apple “Man, I thought you wanna share it with me, its the last apple on Pandora at all!”
“You ‘re kidding me, Max, please leave it on the desk next to Jake.” Max is dropping the apple and rush away to Mo’at, who just started to remble on her whole body. The apple, still in motion, rolls on the table down the data-uplink pad and falls down to Neytiri’s chest. Her eyes are opening slowly as she obviously regain conciousness. She looks at the apple on her chest and attempt to grab it with her right hand. Jake has just left to get something to drink and new wiping towels. Neytiri’s arm is trembeling as she manages to get the apparently tiny apple into her massive hand and opens slowly her mouth, moaning under the pain. After a painful bite, she chews shortly and swallow down, leaving the remaining half of the apple in her hand, her eyes are closing again.
“My apple is still not at the table” barks Norm before he recognizes what happened with it. “Oh my god, oh my goood” he bursts out “Neytiri ate an apple, never ever a Na’vi has consumed organics from earth!!” Jake is rushing back in. “What happened?”
Neytiri starts to sweat heavily, water is running down her body as she gets connected to further biovital monitoring panels. Chaotic scenes above Neyriti as only heads can be seen above her motionless body. Sounds, screams, voices. Neytiri seems leaving. Jack kisses her forehead, finally will be pushed away by another medic rushing in.
"We 're loosing her, heart rate is fluctuating, blood pressure almost zero!" Jake reels away from the scene, he screams, he cries. Voices around him, he feels like his heart stop beating, he cant breath anymore and leans against a wall, sinking slowly to the ground.

***moments later***

“Guys!!” Norm shouts in “I got her vital signs back! They look strong and stable, yeah, yeah, come’on baby!” Jake’s eyes are widening
“She’s coming back!” Max gesticulate happily. “How is that possible?”
Jake rushes in, trying to reach Neytiri through the bunch of active docs and scientists around her. Perry takes another blood sample of her and put it under the microscope.
Seconds later: “To the gods sake, it’s the apple! Its the damn apple from earth!! Its enzymes literraly neutralized the poison out of her body!”
“We must get it duplicated for all others, its gonna be a run against time, though!” Dorm shouts in.
Neytiri’s eyes are opening. She coughs a bit.. looking at Jake above her and smile.

The scientists and physicians are continuing their effort in order to extract and duplicate the life-saving enzyme. Neytiri starts to regain her body functions but each time she attempts to get off the bed to check for her people, she gets ordered back to lie down and take rest as her body is still needing time. She asks Jack in na’vi and protesting face why shall she listen to humans. Jake calms her down as he explains her that THEY are here to help. Jake still cant really believe it that a damn simple apple from earth has just saved his Neytiri. It was not eywa this time, it was a common fruit on a planet 4.3 lightyears away. Jake pulls down the blanket to cover Neytiri’s feet, noticing the display at the end of the bed, also indicating the weight of the patient on it. 182,89 kg. And Pandora has only 80% of earth gravity as he learned during the briefing shortly before undocking from the ISS Venture. So on earth it should be almost 230kg. He shrugs. Thats almost three times of his own body weight he had on earth. He then looks down on himself, realizing he’s not a human anymore and forever.

It takes hours for the scientists to synthetizise the enzyme and to get it injected to every surviving Omaticaya. For four children and two eldery the rescuing enzyme comes too late. Norm collapses exhausted on his chair as it starts to get light.




[END OF PART THREE, PLS FIND ATTACHED PART FOUR BELOW]