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KalaKuival
01-03-2010, 05:34 AM
I recently read someones peome here and i thought i'd make one too:D

"Avatar is great!"

Why is this movie so great?
A little fella was curious
He was apperantly on a date
And seemed to be furious

I told him, „Lil hobbit,
You go watch the movie
I’m sure you’re gonna like it
It’s just so groovy.“

So the small wannabe told his mate
That she’s going to have to wait
He listened me, I thought it was great,
Unfortionatly, he was too late

The cinemaman told him sadly
That the tickets had been sold out
His girlfriend smiled gladly
But the young man started to shout

„What the ...., gimme a ticket
Or i’ll kill you right here!“
„Woa, calm down, lil midget,
I’m sure I’ll find you a seat somewhere!“

„Good, now I wanna know
When will the movie begin?“
„OMG,“ the ticketman set his head low
„It has already begun!“

„Ooh, dang, the boy was mad
Well, nice knowing you, lad“
He kissed his girl and left the building
Now ain’t that a nice ending?

supersven
01-03-2010, 05:43 AM
This is a very good and funny poem:D

neytirifanboy
01-03-2010, 06:13 AM
A very entertaining light-hearted ditty. The ending seemed to be sad though.

neytirifanboy
01-16-2010, 04:49 PM
Another nice Avatar related poem for consideration

Palulukan
01-16-2010, 04:59 PM
It had flow issues but the story was great lol :D

tsmukan
01-17-2010, 03:49 PM
That was a very odd poem. but enjoyable nonetheless.