Great story about Jake's and Neytiri's mating

[Rider of the Last Shadow]

I just read this story Tsahaylu (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5698002/1/Tsahaylu#) and I sincerely recommend everyone to read it, it's not long but it's great :nsmile:

[Kestor]

It really is a great read, very well written and it has an original take on it too. I recommend it as well :)

Thanks a lot for putting this here.

[Txantsulsam Fyawintxu]

Wow... Very beautiful... Extremely touching and where words cannot explain. Thank you for this stunning contribution. I wonder if it's someone from this site...

[Rubicon]

pretty good.

[Sugar_mouse]

I read this the other day and thought it was really sweet and really well written too which makes it even better (says the literature geek inside me!)

[Palulukan_Taronyu]

Wow...Kewl!

[Pandora]

Absolutely beautiful piece of writing.
I loved the flashforward of them playing around and kissing.
Recommend this to anyone who looks at this topic.

[Until The Cows Come Home]

Nice.

[NachoDuck]

A beautiful and very well written scene, this is the sort of thing I'd love to see in an Avatar novel one day. It's great that they expanded greatly on the piece from the scriptment and did it such a wonderful way.

Thanks alot for sharing this :nparty:!

[Marzan]

I just read it and thought it was really good, thanks for sharing it.

[Rider of the Last Shadow]

I'm glad you all like it :)

[TarukMakto]

That was a beautiful piece of writing...well done!

[Sight Unseen]

I wanna be a Na'vi so I can do this. :nembarrassed:

[Xmal'hautl]

Yes , very very beautiful, thank you for sharing.

I can also recommend the story "A New Life Begins" from the same author. Just click on his name to find it.
It takes place directly after the movie when Jake opens his eyes.

[NachoDuck]

Yes , very very beautiful, thank you for sharing.

I can also recommend the story "A New Life Begins" from the same author. Just click on his name to find it.
It takes place directly after the movie when Jake opens his eyes.
That's quite a good one aswell, not as good as the one linked in the OP mind. Although I suppose that one is completely written from scratch, where as the other is loosely based on the scriptment. It certainly gives some ideas for the sequel :ntongue:.

[Apollo]

Sublime, I'm now very jealous for some reason. :nsad:

[Tsyal Makto]

Sublime, I'm now very jealous for some reason. :nsad:

This.:nconfused:

Great story, captured the moment well.:nsmile:

[Inzainiac]

Wow, I read that one and couldn't help but read the other 3 stories by this author. They were all amazing!

[Morrell]

Just... WOW! Perfect. I had read in another thread about the pattern on their body changing... Can't say I paid it any attention in the theater. Did anyone see this or was this just made up for the story?

[Human No More]

That was... really beautiful. Amazing.

I'm not usually someone who reads fanfic, but that was how it SHOULD be, really exploring Neytiri's feelings and it just shares the whole beauty of Pandora.

[Pandora_Paradise]

THX for sharing，It's pretty good LOL:nsmile:

[Immolator39]

Nice piece of work that author did ;)

Its as if you could really imagine it in the movie..

[tingay tirea]

Great Story!

thanks for sharing

[victortky]

very nicely written, really conveys the expressions and feelings of both jake and neytiri.

I read another one named "choices" very highly recommended

[Nevets]

I just read this story Tsahaylu (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5698002/1/Tsahaylu#) and I sincerely recommend everyone to read it, it's not long but it's great :nsmile:

Bravo....great read

[Redon]

I'd love to have a whole book about Avatar like this, so I could spend hours on reading through the whole story and discover more about the characters feelings :in-love: Thanks for sharing that!

[muffinzrgood]

it defenitley pulled me in even after i've seen the movie

[NaviDomas]

2 words....Emotionally Amazing

[ChildOfEywa]

Good story but Beyral Is ment to be Peyral

[Na'viWalker]

I really liked that story. It was a great read, even though it was just a fan fic, I found it to be very well thought and well written piece! Great Find!

[tingay tirea]

thanks for sharing this..

[Dashwater]

I used to read the script from time to time and my favourite part has always been the mating scene. Unfortunately it's not very detailed (and not shown in the movie :nsad:), but now I discovered this beautiful piece of writing (thx for sharing btw) and can't stop reading it. Amazing!

[toruk-macto]

thanks for sharing :) its nicely written

[last shadow]

Beautiful

Thanks for the post :)

[Ja'k Dawsiin]

i know this is a big BUMP...but i just read this story today,and wow,it really does put you in that scene. i love that it shows the emotion/thought pov of Neytiri,as she is truly the emotional draw of this film. well written,and thank you for giving me some more intimate details of this scene,as i felt that scene had needed a little something more.

[Ftxavanga Txe'lan]

It's pretty good, thanks for sharing (: I like how we get into Neytiri's thoughts and see how she feels.

However, I have to point out that the spelling of the Na'vi words kinda disturbed me, particularly the title. Well, I guess it's a bit picky, but I just couldn't help bugging every time there was a mistake xD I find it's a shame when the beautiful style of a text is disturbed by the spelling of specific terms.

[Lifetothemax]

Wow...that was an incredible read...I'm speechless

[jerlin09]

Extremely touching and where words cannot explain. Thank you for this stunning contribution. I wonder if it's someone from this site...

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[Lionheart]

Very touching. Great read.