stubydub
11-24-2010, 09:22 PM
NOTE: i had to re- write this 4 times :D and constructive criticism i welcome i want to get better :D
He was hated so it made sense i was thinking as i provided my security pass to the guard outside the heavy-set doors. The guard yelled in my ear “hey calm down I’m right here meat-head”. I walked down the hall ears still ringing like hell when i had to pass yet another security stop annoyed i had to go through all this i knocked on the heavy doors and looked out the window it was a sad sight i had heard we had once had trees basically everywhere, well that wasn’t the case anymore, what i saw was gray with a million lights mixed in.... gray what a boring color i suddenly felt a tug and i was pulled into the room and there he was the man that everyone hated standing in my face, man what some people would give to be here right now.... to kill him. He sat down looked at me and said “mark I’m being payed **** to do my job” and what does that have to do with me sir? I’m working for the RDA as i assume you already know” i did know, hell everyone knew that was why he was hated he was hiring security for the RDA that’s why the U.S was losing the war in Venezuela he single handidly had got half of the united states military to go to Pandora. I saw now why i was here i looked at the ground and rubbed my neck “i don’t know sir” “ i know you want to go son” i did want to go i didn’t owe anything to earth Pandora would be a fresh start somewhere where i could finally forget my wife’s death “I’ll go” need i say more?
END PART 1
He was hated so it made sense i was thinking as i provided my security pass to the guard outside the heavy-set doors. The guard yelled in my ear “hey calm down I’m right here meat-head”. I walked down the hall ears still ringing like hell when i had to pass yet another security stop annoyed i had to go through all this i knocked on the heavy doors and looked out the window it was a sad sight i had heard we had once had trees basically everywhere, well that wasn’t the case anymore, what i saw was gray with a million lights mixed in.... gray what a boring color i suddenly felt a tug and i was pulled into the room and there he was the man that everyone hated standing in my face, man what some people would give to be here right now.... to kill him. He sat down looked at me and said “mark I’m being payed **** to do my job” and what does that have to do with me sir? I’m working for the RDA as i assume you already know” i did know, hell everyone knew that was why he was hated he was hiring security for the RDA that’s why the U.S was losing the war in Venezuela he single handidly had got half of the united states military to go to Pandora. I saw now why i was here i looked at the ground and rubbed my neck “i don’t know sir” “ i know you want to go son” i did want to go i didn’t owe anything to earth Pandora would be a fresh start somewhere where i could finally forget my wife’s death “I’ll go” need i say more?
END PART 1