seze00
08-31-2010, 05:50 PM
okay, so here i am again trying to make my place here. so here is a little story i wrote about a chick named Angelina Quaritch, Miles Quartich's daughter. this story i know is mixed up and does not go with the original story line of avatar, but i know it has some ties with the movie. i mean it has the RDA and Na'vi in it. so, PLEASE DONT JUDGE. i'm like 14 and am just starting my writing process.
CHAPTER 1: I Was Heading For Much Better Place than This
SECTION 1 *RDA IMPRINT*
I slapped on my white pajamas, climbed into my cryo chamber and laid back. It was cold and empty, quite like my mind at this time. I have studied about it, dreamed about it, yet I knew nothing of it. I was going to a place far away from home...far away from a world I knew, a galaxy I had studied.
The year is 2151. Most people have forgotten about a lot of things. One of those things would be saving the Earth. Recycling, conserving energy, and saving our oceans stopped all together in September 13, 2116. The big oil spill of 2010 was never stopped and now only 1/3 of the Atlantic Ocean remains clear of oil. Nuclear waste is being stored in alley dumpsters and sludge is overflowing the city streets. The world is compacted with waste and people. It stinks. Day no longer looks like day time. The ozone layer is torn beyond repair, which forces people to wear layers of heavy clothing in the burning heat to keep the skin from burning. Due to pollution and atomic testing, the air is getting extremely toxic and more than 75% of humans have asthma. The other percent of humans have to wear breathing masks called exopack to protect against the air and airborne diseases.
“Is everyone okay?” an operator yelled.
Everyone nodded yes. Truth was I was freezing. But that was the whole point. They’re called cryo chambers. They freeze the human body for the appointed time to keep the body alive but unconscious and nourished. I will be frozen for 5 years, 9 months, and 22 days. I’m on the ISV Venture Star Ship. It’s called the mother ship. Nearly 4.938 feet long, 990 feet wide and 655.5 feet high. Along with us are RDA machines and Avatars aboard. The avatars are the only reason I’m willing to risk my life to go to an unfamiliar place.
The cryobank I was in slowly closed. I finally was induced and was falling asleep. I was eager for these sleeping years to pass, because I knew that I was heading for a place much better than this. Away from my home planet in order to possibly save it. I am ready to take that chance.
:nhi:
CHAPTER 1: I Was Heading For Much Better Place than This
SECTION 1 *RDA IMPRINT*
I slapped on my white pajamas, climbed into my cryo chamber and laid back. It was cold and empty, quite like my mind at this time. I have studied about it, dreamed about it, yet I knew nothing of it. I was going to a place far away from home...far away from a world I knew, a galaxy I had studied.
The year is 2151. Most people have forgotten about a lot of things. One of those things would be saving the Earth. Recycling, conserving energy, and saving our oceans stopped all together in September 13, 2116. The big oil spill of 2010 was never stopped and now only 1/3 of the Atlantic Ocean remains clear of oil. Nuclear waste is being stored in alley dumpsters and sludge is overflowing the city streets. The world is compacted with waste and people. It stinks. Day no longer looks like day time. The ozone layer is torn beyond repair, which forces people to wear layers of heavy clothing in the burning heat to keep the skin from burning. Due to pollution and atomic testing, the air is getting extremely toxic and more than 75% of humans have asthma. The other percent of humans have to wear breathing masks called exopack to protect against the air and airborne diseases.
“Is everyone okay?” an operator yelled.
Everyone nodded yes. Truth was I was freezing. But that was the whole point. They’re called cryo chambers. They freeze the human body for the appointed time to keep the body alive but unconscious and nourished. I will be frozen for 5 years, 9 months, and 22 days. I’m on the ISV Venture Star Ship. It’s called the mother ship. Nearly 4.938 feet long, 990 feet wide and 655.5 feet high. Along with us are RDA machines and Avatars aboard. The avatars are the only reason I’m willing to risk my life to go to an unfamiliar place.
The cryobank I was in slowly closed. I finally was induced and was falling asleep. I was eager for these sleeping years to pass, because I knew that I was heading for a place much better than this. Away from my home planet in order to possibly save it. I am ready to take that chance.
:nhi: